I like this piece very much. As said below, you've displayed temptation very well. Personally, I would maybe have enjoyed her lips in red more. As temptation both has a dark side, but also a passionate side (aka red). But despite that, I think you did a wonderful job with this piece.
Thank you very much! Actually her lips are Bloody but i submitted it in low resolution so you can't really see it But thank you very much for your constructive comments! I really really appreciate that! It's always nice to get something more to hear than just "nice work"